off the wall paper looks good.leave it for now.like both the opener and jump of 400 sq ft.typography for tree house title does not make sense.font says arts and crafts movement and tree house is not that.also, layout isn't working yet.typography doesn't work on the pic.pic is too small on one page of the spread.find the title, fish bowl in the upper left corner distracting.always thinking it's a rubric.looking there first to see what section i'm in.it's not that important.once we've bought the mag, we've bought into the fantasy.you don't have to tell me on the top of every page.you could be using that space for more interesting things that are in the mag.typography for your departments is still rough.headline is too large.maybe the font doesn't work.don't know until i see it smaller, etc.second case studies layout, second take the high road layout.but, both still need work.mostly typography fixes.subtle things.sizes, spacing, etc.the re-model isn't working for me.but, let's see in class.feels like the text type is too dense and too concentrated.would break that up a bit.love.g.
off the wall paper looks good.
ReplyDeleteleave it for now.
like both the opener and jump of 400 sq ft.
typography for tree house title does not make sense.
font says arts and crafts movement and tree house is not that.
also, layout isn't working yet.
typography doesn't work on the pic.
pic is too small on one page of the spread.
find the title, fish bowl in the upper left corner distracting.
always thinking it's a rubric.
looking there first to see what section i'm in.
it's not that important.
once we've bought the mag, we've bought into the fantasy.
you don't have to tell me on the top of every page.
you could be using that space for more interesting things that are in the mag.
typography for your departments is still rough.
headline is too large.
maybe the font doesn't work.
don't know until i see it smaller, etc.
second case studies layout, second take the high road layout.
but, both still need work.
mostly typography fixes.
subtle things.
sizes, spacing, etc.
the re-model isn't working for me.
but, let's see in class.
feels like the text type is too dense and too concentrated.
would break that up a bit.
love.
g.